Gone to the Dogs Part 1: Treats by Karn

@Skriptz had an idea for a series and asked me for my take on it. Hope you enjoy. :heart:


“*chirp…*chirp…eep!!!”

Freshly freed from it’s tube, the off green foal screeched as it tumbled from the glass cylinder into the padded floor. Peeping as it tried to recover, it slowly opened it’s eyes, calming from it’s ordeal as it realized it had been freed, and was desperate to catch a glimpse of it’s new owner. It peered upwards, it’s tiny vestigial wings flapping with excitement as it tried to see over the opaque plastic walls of it’s new safe-room, made from a simple plastic bin.

“*chirp…*chirp…*chirp…nyu da’deh? *chirp…*chirp…wuv?”

Only able to see the back of the man that had liberated him, the green pegasus began to whimper as his new owner walked away without a word. Feeling spurned, he let his hoof instinctually raise to his mouth as he suckled nervously.

“*chirp…*chirp…*huuu…huuu…huuu…wai nu wuv?”

“Pwease nu cwy…widdew wingie fwend gowna wakies odah babbehs…”

Raising his head, the pegasus looked towards the sudden voice to see another foal, a chubby brown earthie almost twice his size. And behind her was a small pile of foals of a variety of colors, all huddled near a large nightlight that had been worked through the wall of the plastic bin. Most were gently slumbering near the warm iridescent bulb, while a few stirred and peeped

“*chirp…*chirp…*chirp…wewe da’deh?”

“tu wowd…babbeh sweepies nao…”

“*chirp…*chirp…scaw’d…*chirp…*chirp…”

Seeing the brown foal, as well as the cozy looking fluffpile made the pegasus smile, his wings bobbing up and down with excitement as he realized that he didn’t just have a new owner, he might have new friends…maybe even a family.

“*chirp…*chirp…*chirp…nyu fwend? nyu fwends?!”

Giggling slightly, the rotund brown foal nodded, waddling up to the pegasus and awkwardly squatted on her haunches, putting her small nubs around the newcomer. It was the first physical contact the little foal had ever know, cooing as he nuzzled against the filly.

“Babbehs awways hab woom fow wan mowe fwend!”


It had taken a while for the pegasus to calm himself enough to sleep, the sensation of being warm and comfortable in a fluffpile being so wonderful, like a dream that he somehow knew even before it happened. Drifting off, it wasn’t until a few hours later that he found himself abruptly picked up by his scruff and lifted out of his tiny saferoom.

“*screeeeeee!!! *chirp…*chirp…ba’ upsies! *chirp…*chirp…hewp!”

Flailing madly, his whole body wiggling and writhing as he screamed, the pegasus tried to escape until he opened his eyes, realizing that he had been lifted out by his owner. Still kicking slightly as the sensation of being held incorrectly and so high up, the foal couldn’t help but grow overjoyed at the sight and touch of his new father.

“*chirp…*chirp…*chirp…nyu da’deh?! *chirp…*chirp…*chirp…ba’beh wuvs nyu da’deh!”

Shifting as best as his little body would allow, the tiny pegasus moved his awkward little nubs around the man’s thumb, hugging him as hard as the delicate creature was capable of. While he had adored the hug he had gotten from the brown mare, and the fluffpile felt wonderful, there was a sensation beyond that when he cuddled against his owner’s hand and felt the warmth of his flesh. It was like discovering his purpose in life, like finding a missing puzzle piece.

Which made the fact that his new daddy simply pulled him free of his hand a moment later all the more painful, as he tugged the pegasus’ little hooves free before taking him to a small tray filled with litter and held him over it, placing his thumb on his stomach and pressing firmly until the foal let out a pained croak and voided both bladder and bowels.

“eep!!! *chirp…*chirp… nu wan huw’te poopies!!! *chirp…*chirp…ba’behs fo’ wuv! *huuu…huuu…huuu…”

Now crying, the pegasus tried reaching out for him again, needing some sort of consolation after the sudden rejection of being pulled from the hug by force, not to mention the painful evacuation. But before the foal could get close enough again, the man casually reached onto a high shelf nearby, rifling through a small box before pulling out a small brown pellet and pushing it into the pegasus’ mouth, nearly choking the tiny fluff. Shaking his head at first, it took a few moments for the foal to realize that it was food, the pellet dissolving into a sweet, milk-like paste as he suckled on it. As the pegasus nummed slowly on his meal, the man walked back to the plastic bin and put him back within, taking another foal and walking away.

“am wike miwkies! *chirp…*chirp…*chirp…wuv miwkies num’me!”

As he finished the milk pellet, the brown filly waddled over towards him, this time with another bigger foal, an earthie with purple fluff.

“Yay! Am nummie tweat time soon!”

Finishing his food, the pegasus waddled over to greet the mare, curious about the other big foal and always eager to meet another fluffy. Before the little foal could even speak up, the purple earthie giggled, snatching him in his hooves and hugging him.

“Hewwo nyu babbeh! Wan be nyu fwend?”

Clearly enthusiastic with his affections, the purple foal gripped tightly against the pegasus as the tiny fluffs wings flapped and spasmed before being ceremoniously let go. Wheezing slightly, the pegasus was helped back up by the brown filly who shot an annoyed glance towards the purple colt.

“Nu huggies nyu babbeh su hawd! Nee’ be cawefuw wiff widdew babbehs wike wingie fwend…”

“Babbeh gib wingie fwend huwties?! Nu! Babbeh gib huggies an’ maek bettah!”

Wobbling forward, the purple colt nearly grabbed the pegasus again, if not for the filly sighing and halting his progress with her nub.

“Widdew wingie babbeh hab nuff fow nao…An’ b’sides…fwend gowna hab nummies soon wite?”

Stopping in his tracks, the loveable but dimwitted colt smiled at the mere mention of food, giggling and heading back to the fluffpile, anxious to be picked by their owner next. Shaking her head slightly, the filly patted the pegasus on his back as he finally was able to breathe without wheezing.

“Sowwy fow odah fwend…am gud babbeh buh nu kno hao tu huggies wite…Widdew babbeh otay?”

“*chirp…*chirp…*chirp…b…ba’beh otay…*chirp…*chirp…buh wai da’deh nu gib wuvs?! *chirp…*chirp…ba’beh wan wuvs! *huuu…huuu…huuu…”

“Deww, deww widdew wingie babbeh…Pwease nu cwy…Daddeh nu gib wots of huggies…an’ nu am wown’d a howe wot…buh daddeh wuvs babbehs! Gibs babbehs nices’ safewoom an’ wite dat am wawm an’ keepsies way’ nu bwite time. An’ daddeh hewps babbehs maek gub poopies an’ gibs bestest nummies tu!”

Wiping his tears away, the little pegasus took in the filly’s words, nodding in agreement as he began to calm. It was true that his new daddy wasn’t what he thought he’d be, but that didn’t mean he was a bad owner or didn’t love him. Hugging his new filly friend, the pegasus chirped and cooed contently, feeling like the luckiest fluffy in the world.


Walking to the pantry, the young girl opened the door and flicked on the overhead light, causing a small bit of peeping and chirping to come from the plastic bin below her.

“Three of em’, right Uncle AJ?”

“That’s right! Grab me three of em’! Don’t want the pups fighting over who gets what!”

Reaching down, the girl grabbed three that were close enough together to gather quickly, a purple and brown earthie as well as a green pegasus. Waking suddenly, the trio began to chirp and peep anxiously as they were lifted from the warmth and safety of the fluffpile, wiggling awkwardly in the stranger’s hands.

“Ba’ upsies!!! Wet babbeh down!!!”

“Wewe am daddeh nyu fwend?”

“*chirp…*chirp…ba’beh scaw’d! *chirp…*chirp…”

Cradling the bunch of confused foals against her chest, the young girl then walked them out of the pantry, nudging the light with her shoulder before kicking the door closed with her foot. Slowly making her way through the house, the foals, while still nervous, were stunned to see just how large their owner’s home truly was. Lost in the awe of all the marvelous sight to take in, the little fluffs were shocked as the strange girl opened a sliding glass door, and they heard the abrupt noise of high pitched whining and eager barks.

“You sure these things are okay for the pups Uncle AJ?”

“Course I am Rachel. Go on and give one a command…”

The young girl held the pegasus and the brown earthie against herself with one hand as she took the purple colt and dangled it by it’s scruff, the already nervous foal now kicking wildly as it’s eyes focused on the trio of large canines, two of which were pulling a rope between themselves with their teeth. The third however, had taken notice of the fluffies that Rachel was holding, it’s eyes staring right back at the purple colt in horrible anticipation.

“NUUUUUUU!!! *chirp…*chirp…WET BABBEH GU!!! AM ONWY WIDDEW…”

“Walker…catch!”

Tossed through the air, the purple colt screamed until he was snatched by the eager pup. Excited to have caught his treat, he shook the foal violently as his teeth sunk into the colt’s delicate flesh, tiny ribbons of blood dancing through the air as the colt’s screams began to warble and die down.

“*SCREEEEEEE NUUUUUUU!!! PWEASE!!! NUUUUUUU!!! SCREEEEee…”

After several seconds of shaking the fun and vocal treat, Walker let it fall between his paws as he began to voraciously rip at it with his jaws, tearing small bits of flesh and meat as the colt simply wheezed and seized. With the fifth bite, the foal’s eyes went glossy and it’s body still, with Walker either too hungry to care to too excited to notice.

“Well I’ll be damned…”

“Language little missy…and I told you, they love em’! But you gotta make the pups work harder than that for a treat…”

“Sorry Uncle AJ…”

As Rachel and her uncle discussed the tricks the eager pets knew, the foals still in the young girl’s clutches were horrified, having seen much of what had happened to the purple colt. Once the filly had seen the dog drop their friend however, something in her knew to look away, clutching the pegasus against her chestfluff to shield his eyes as well.

“*chirp…*chirp…nuuuuuu!!! *chirp…*chirp…wai fwend gu way’?!?”

“*huuu…huuu…huuu…Nu wook widdew fwend…jus’ nu wook…”

By the time she found the bravery to look again, there was nothing left but a small puddle of blood, Walker lapping up the small mess as she looked on in horror. Letting out small involuntary peeps of distress, it dawned on her that the only one who could save them was their owner.

“HEWP!!! *chirp…*chirp…DADDEH PWEASE SAB BABBEHS!!!..*chirp…*chirp…”

Her pleas fell on deaf ears. Whether they didn’t hear her or simply didn’t care, she would never know, as Rachel took the filly in her other hand, placing it closer and closer to another pup.

“*SCREEEEEEE!!! *chirp…*chirp…NUUUUUU!!! PWEASE DADDEH!!! *chirp…*chirp…BABBEH AM GUD!!!”

“…so I just put it on her nose?”

“That’s right! Put it on her nose and watch…it’s cute.”

Holding the filly at an odd angle, Rachel placed her onto the dog’s snout, her back against the top of the beast’s muzzle. Scared for her very life, the filly began to flail her tiny nubs as she shook and twisted as hard as her little body could muster, but it was to no avail. She was stuck as the dog’s eyes kept focusing on her and then Rachel, breathing heavily with anticipation.

“BABBEH SOWWY!!! *chirp…*chirp…BABBEH SU SOWWY!!! *chirp…*chirp…WAT’ EVAH BABBEH DU WONG, BABBEH NEBAH DU GAIN’!!!”

“*chirp…*chirp…gib fwend back!!! *chirp…*chirp…pwe’ !!!”

“Even with all that fidgeting…that’s impressive! Susanna is a good girl…”

“B…babbeh namsies am Su’sanna? Dat namsies am su nices’…Tank…”

“Okay Susanna…Now !!!”

On Rachel’s command, the pup slid her nose away, grabbing the screeching foal out of the air and crushing her in one horrible bite. Barely alive, the filly’s eyes began to roll in her head as she babbled strange and incoherent noises, finally going still a few seconds later. Once at peace, Susanna devoured her treat in a couple of bites, blood still dripping from her maw as she looked up to Rachel and whined, offering a paw as she eyed the pegasus.

“*chirp…*chirp…nuuuuuuu!!!”

“No girl…no more for you today…this one is for Rex…Wow, this one is tiny Uncle AJ…”

“Let me see…aw damn…I think you grabbed one of the new ones by mistake…and a pegasus to boot…gonna be nothing but skin and bones…”

“Should I take it back? Get a new one?”

“…Nah…it’d upset the others and make things harder in the long run…I’ll just give Rex a bigger supper later…”

“*screeeeeee!!!”

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Fascinating. I’m not sure if it was on purpose, but it almost seems as if the owners didn’t even hear the Fluffies speak. It makes me wonder if, in a world where Fluffies are incapable of speaking and instead only communicate with each other, this is what would happen. At that point, they really are nothing more than rats in cages, their pleas always falling on deaf ears since nobody can even understand them, but they don’t realize this.

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They could hear them, but it was written with an emphasis on the uncle/niece simply not caring.
That’s an interesting premise though. A world where fluffies can still speak, but only to each other.

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That was awesome and just the way I pictured it. Thank you again and i look forward to the next parts.

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Not a problem dude
Glad you enjoyed it.

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