Hey hey folks, been a hot minute since I posted the first three pages. I’d hoped to post the rest in three-page groups, but, ah, pages 5 and 6 don’t currently exist, so to speak. I’ve taken on a few more projects than I probably should have, and this has ended up on the backburner as a result.
It was nice to get back in the fluffy saddle after a bit of a break, though. As always, feedback and critique is both welcomed and invited.
Your chirpies in this series look like beanie babies with b if, overstuffed hooves! It’s very very cute, they look so floppy and squishy and adorable. Love it.
They’re newborn chirpies - their manes and tails will grow in later.
For those wondering, I think the kanji/hanzi in panel 1 is 死 and reads “Death” or “Die”, depending on language; the left hand side is a bit deformed as the 3rd stroke should have a a more defined 90 degree turn and the 4th stroke is supposed to touch the 2nd and 3rd strokes.
Hope this means the yellow purple fluffy stays nice to their less colorful sibling. Its so damn rare to have stuff where the foals dont like or partake in the abuse their mummah puts their less colorful sibling
Or Option 3; the mother ends up despising both her bestest (for continual disobedience) and poopie (because it’s a poopie) children and stomps on them both.
Rule of BFM - it can always get worse.
Edit: Ooops, NeroVance already mentioned that option - my bad.