Sensitive Topic: Part 2 (FluffnPuff)

Sapphire entered the house and looked around. The inside was pretty basic and to be fair sapphire didn’t like it very much. It was all boring and poopie colored, unaware that this was actually pretty good wood in human terms. She seemed unimpressed however. Where were the bright colored pens? All the other Fluffies? Where was the food? As if Monica, the lady, could hear her thoughts, she brought her to the backyard. It was filled with various quality mares all playing happily with eachother and foals. Chirpies were kept inside however with the milk bags.

“Wow! Dis am suuu pwetty! Saffiwe Wub nyu housie! Pewfect fow Mummah an bestesh babbeh!” “GASP”

Sapphire looked up to find every single mare and foal looking at her in utter shock. She had said those last two out loud. Monica set down the fillies and the mares could easily tell which was the bestesh in question. The Fatass filly sucking on her hoof after the long trek. Female sensitives were very uncommon and Monica normally killed any that came up. A chocolate brown unicorn mare with a sparkly violet mane and tail stepped towards Sapphire.

“Dewe am nu bestesh babbehs hewe. Dat babbeh nu nee mowe miwkies! Mummah Mo-ni-ca said su!” She glared at Sapphire with disdain.

The other mares knew this one as Rachel. She was one of the top foal producers, with her sparkly mane genetics and recessive fluff genes, she produced only the best. Also Monica found her to be a blast. She was sassy and helped keep the others in check, making sure to look out for any bad behavior. She had given birth just a few hours ago, but was still able to tell the new girl what’s what.

“W-who am ou? Nu tawkies to Saffiwe wike dat! Wiww uhm…wiww gib sowwy poopies!” She threatened. “Dat’s agains dah wuwes.” Rachel replied.

Sapphire had trouble processing. Who did this poopie mare think she was? Sure she had…the prettiest mane that Sapphire has ever seen but that didn’t take away from her poopie fluff! She was still a poopie fluffy! Sapphire watched as her two mentally coherent daughters stared at the backyard. One of the other mares approached them, a soft pink and orange…MUNSTUH! a monster was approaching her children! Especially her bestest!

“Oh nu, dis babbeh am sensitibe, haf to gu.” “NU! SAFFIEW GIB MUNSTUH WOWSTEST STOMPIES IF HUWT BESTESH!” Sapphire snarled jumping in front of her daughter.

Monica pulled Sapphire up by the scruff and after she complained about bad upies, she said,

“Listen here cunt! No more best baby bullshit! That foal is technically useless! She can’t breed, she’ll never grow up, the best thing I could use her for is a milk bag! But I will use her to test you, got it?” She said, droppimg the blue mare.

Sapphire whined about hurties but got to her hooves. She wanted to throw a tantrum and argue but with all these bigger, more well-fed and stronger mares, that isn’t an option. Monica looked and them and decided to give the foals names.

“Alright The green filly is Jade, the purple one is Amethyst and the idiot can be Lapis.”

The two foals looked at eachother, so happy! They got names! Jade and Amethyst hopped around eachother happily while Lapis laid there, chirping in confusion. She was just now opening her yellow eyes, but wouldn’t speak a word. Sapphire was too busy being upset to notice. She picked up her sensitive and looked for a place to get cozy. There were a couple empty nesties but some had foals. She found an empty unclaimed one and set her fat child down.

Jade and Amethyst watched and couldn’t understand. Why does mummah not love them as much as she loves Lapis? Did they do something wrong? The pink and orange alicorn approached them again and said,

“Gwapefwuit hab miwkies, if babbehs wan any. Wook wike hab tummeh huwties.” “Mo-Mo hab miwkies too!” Said a Purple and Silver mare.

Jade and Amethyst were so astounded, so many milkie mares! And they were just gonna…let them have some!? It’s a dream come true! Meanwhile Monica had plans. The other two fillies could easily be trained on the rules but Lapis has to solely rely on her mother for help. It was only a matter of time before she messed up, maybe she couldn’t get to the litterbox fast enough or accidently hurt another baby due to her greed.

Speaking of Lapis she was trying to suckle but her mummah had no more milkies, causing her to peep in anger as she looked around for milk, and spotted a burgundy mare with a black mane and tail that had rainbow streaks in it. This was Rum. She was the quietest but also the most well behaved and strict of the mares. She was sitting up with her eyes closed. Bingo!

Rum was humming to herself but jolted when she felt something warm and wet latch onto one of her big ass mommy milkers and saw the blue lardball. She grunted and snatched her off, causing the filly to start squeaking and chirping in distress.

“Whoshe babbeh ish dish?” She said through a mouth full of fat scruff.

Sapphire gasped and took her babbeh away from Rum. She fussed over her as she checked where the mean mare had bitten her and licked the little indents. Rum rolled her eyes at how much Sapphire was fussing over the little mistake and said.

“Wum am confoosed. Mummah Mo-ni-ca aways gib sensitibes foweba sweepies…why keep dis one?”

Sapphire paused and looked up shocked. She kills the sensitive babbehs!? Why, she couldn’t fathom it! That’s not what the shelter taught her! The shelter taught her that babbehs were for Huggies and love, not death! Rum saw the look of fear in her eyes and smirked saying,

“Nu wet dat babbeh dwink too much, it am bad fow it.” Before walking off to join the other mares.

Jade peeped in content as she and her sister suckled from Grapefruit. These milkies were so much sweeter than their Mummah’s. Maybe because the mares just had sketti day earlier. This was just Sketti milk. It tasted so good to the fillies! Grapefruit even sang to them! Is this what a mother’s love feels like? After a bit they unlatched.

“Fank ou GwapeFwuit! Amafyst an Jade am su happy!” Amethyst squeaked.

“Gwapefwuit am happy tu Hewp! Nao go pway wif uddah babbehs!” She said.

The two fillies finally noticed the other babbehs. Oh wow. A lot of other babbehs. This was future breeding stock so it was mostly just fillies and a couple of high quality colts. The colts however preferred to play amongst themselves. Jade spotted a pale green blue and yellow winged filly and went up to her.

“Hewwo! Am Jade!” “Oh, Hewwo! Am Sweetie, wan pway?”

Play? Mummah never wanted to play with her. Jade nodded her head excitedly and began joining the pretty filly who ran over to a small group. Amethyst was still with Grapefruit, giving her Huggies. Grapefruit was only a week pregnant so she wasn’t exactly ballooned but she had plenty of fresh milk. Amethyst likes Grapefruit thinking that is was so cool that she had a horn AND wingies!

Monica watched her Fluffies play and flop about being the best mummahs they could be. Sapphire however was gonna fuck up. She could feel it. The sensitive baby was already being a little menace, peeping to be fed but the other mares didn’t give her any, making Sapphire worried and confused. She hates seeing good colors go to waste but alas, she only needed a working body and if she could produce a foal that one to one with her, she can get more of that shade. Tonight, she would start her plan.

(It’s shorter but I’m right on to working the third part! It’s a slow burn yeah, but give it time, Lapis will surely get what’s coming to her, her greed has a price. Buh-bye! (⁠ノ⁠◕⁠ヮ⁠◕⁠)⁠ノ⁠*⁠.⁠✧)

Part 3: Sensitive Topic: Part 3 (FluffnPuff) - #11 by FluffnPuff

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I’m liking this one! Stories with SBS foals are always so fun because a character that’s so helpless allows for really interesting dangers and consequences. Lapis is being a little menace, but it’s not really because of them being sensitive but a failure on Sapphire’s part. Either way, I can’t wait for Sapphire and Lapis to pay for Sapphire’s mistakes!

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Exactly. Sure Lapis doesn’t understand that she was being bad when she tries to steal Rum’s milk but she still did it because Sapphire spoiled her and she felt like it was ok. There will be so many consequences, the question is which one first?

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I’m seriously loving this! Love watching the build before the karmic retribution to kicks in. I also love seeing all the good mummahs taking good care of their foals! They just seem like some well trained and raised mares and I love seeing it. They’re also now getting to watch an idiot make a fool of herself.

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