Okay, so thanks first of all for the warm welcome! I was ver supprised from all the interest for my stuff.
It means alot so I worked hard to crank out the first few pages for you guys!
I know, it starts slow but believe me, shit will go off the rails rather quickly! xD
I have also another three pages in the works atm and really hope you like the story so far!
Good writing can excuse bad art and good art can excuse bad writing.
You put a lot of effort into this and really captured the look of fluffies on the first go, and traditional media tends to fare better with audiences I notice.
I am really looking forward to seeing more of your art.
This is astoundingly well done. You’ve got a solid design for your fluffies and managed to make the bestest an adorable little ball of pudge.
The mare has a weird thing where her face is pinging the uncanny valley something fierce in a few panels. And given the artifical nature of fluffies in universe that’s a good thing!
Yes, Goomy is right! Shes pregnant as well.
Ive read in other stories that Fluffies can rapidly create offspring like real life vermin. So i thought that was an grear idea to incorporare into my story as well.