A commission for @SpaghettiDave
These cuties are Mocha and Nova from his story Lovesick which I enjoyed catching up on during breaks while working on this pic.
Im rather proud of the way this came out, especially the proportions and the eyes! Comments and constructive criticism welcome!
Edit: noticed i forgot to color some lines so i fixed that.
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Lorge cranium xD
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LOVE YOUR STYLE.
SO adorable.
I am struggling to think of any constructive criticism. only suggestion I could POSSIBLY have is if you eeeeeever so slightly blur the background layers (as appropriate to their field depth), even to an almost imperceptible level, it can make the foreground subject pop. It IS a lovely and detailed bit of work you have in the fence and foliage, so I wouldnât want to lose that. Itâs like when Iâve put all this work in a backing track like a rhythm instrument and I hate to âloseâ it but at the end of the mix the singer / lead has to come first so, set ego aside and just filter it a bit, drop it back.
I donât comment on peopleâs art much so this is big. I want more of your work. Please continue !
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So cute 
nice work!
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I love it!
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Exploring-babbehs are bestest babehs 
(not in âbestestâ way but in like bestest way⌠bit confusing really)
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AAAAA thank you! I donât do a lot of background so thatâs a really useful tip and thank you so much for such a big compliment!
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thank you so much for the compliment!! I really enjoy your art!
Lol I got you, and I agree!
Agreed with everyone else here: your work is absolutely gorgeous 
And I totally understand working to improve your craft, but if this is the starting point, youâve got no reason to sell yourself short!
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