The Fluffy Discipliner - Chapter 16 - Season 1 Finale [by LenexTLI]

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Sup, ya’ll, before I start, a quick thank you for reading 16 Chapters of my work so far, sending support, suggestions, and just positive feedback whilst reading this series. It really means a lot to me and motivates me to keep going!

As you probably read in the Title, this is the final Chapter for Season 1 of ‘The Fluffy Discipliner’.

Originally, I had planned to just write a single small series and then move on to another project. However, as I kept writing, genuinely enjoying myself, I somewhat started becoming attached to the characters (Humans and Fluffies alike) and just kept going, now being here with 16 Chapters in total, which is insane to me.

As I was coming close to the ending of this story, I didn’t really want to, to be honest, wanting to keep going. However, I would rather not go on normally and then end up with 40+ Chapters, so, I decided to split the story into Seasons.

Season 1 was mainly focused on introducing some of the main characters, setting up some things, as well as the world, and mainly focusing on Princess’s Arc and Story line, which has now ended!

Also, I understand some people might think that Princess deserved to be hurt, but I think that the psychological ‘abuse’ she went through was worse than any physical abuse could’ve been (plus physical abuse is SOOOOO COMMON LIKE GODDAMN, I WANNA BE DIFFERENTTTTTT). Plus, I think that although what she did was bad, she redeemed herself and felt genuine regret and sadness for her actions, and come one, some people (and Fluffies) deserve a second chance! :smiley:

But you’re probably thinking, “What is going to happen next? How is it all gonna continue?”

Well, we still have the three saferoom foals with Crimson, as well as the Feral Fluffies, their story just beginning. There will also be more Fluffies introduced in Season 2, with a lot of Hugbox, Sadbox, and of course, ABUSE! YAY, MY FAVORITE!!! ;3333

Anyway, I won’t bore you all any longer, so let us start this concluding chapter of Season 1, I hope you enjoy! :DDDD

Quick funny fact: I have been listening to ‘FNAF Phone Guy Bumble Bee (AI Cover)’ for the last 4 chapters, vibing as I wrote some of the most depressing ass sht ever xD

Previous Chapter

Princess had passed out from exhaustion after crying so much, not eating, and mentally drained, now asleep in Chocolates lap. Chocolate gently stroking her head. He was happy that she was finally sleeping as she was not looking good.

“So,” Micheal asked, finally stepping into the room, “What do you want to do now? Do you want to stay by her side and give her a second chance, or do you want to leave with your babies? Personally, I would not hold it against you if you chose the second one!”

Chocolate kept looking at Princess, sleeping, small tears still rolling down from her eyes, “Chocowate wiww stay an’ gib second chance.”

Chocolate smiled her Micheal, “Chocowate think that if babbeh Shadow stiww awibe, fwuffy wouwd wan’ that too aftah seein’ mummah cwy su many heawt huwties fwom sadies.”

Micheal respected Chocolates choice, walking upstairs to bring their babies.

Princess felt like she was floating, her body feeling warm and comfortable. She slowly opened her eyes, seeing white everywhere. Normally, she would have been scared, but for some reason she didn’t feel scared, but instead content.

“Mummah?” a small voice peeped from behind her, making her turn around.

She gasped, holding back tears as Shadow was standing there, wagging his tail at her and smiling brightly. Princess jumped up, wanting to run over to him and hug him, but she stopped.

She didn’t deserve to hug him after what she had done to him, lowering her head, ashamed at herself and what she had become. She closed her eyes, feeling herself tear up again. However, she suddenly felt a warm embrace on her stomach, opening her teary eyes, seeing Shadow hug her.

“Nu hab heawt huwties mummah, Shadow wub mummah!” He smiled brightly at her, making Princess cry.

“Buh, am wowstes’ mummah, gib babbeh fowebew-sweepies!” Princess cried, Shadow still hugging her warmly.

“Babbeh knu’, buh babbeh nu hab pain nao, su mummah nu be sadies!” he explained, “Shadow knu’ mummah hab biggest heaw huwties an’ am sowwy, su Shadow nu am angwy, Shadow wub mummah aftah aww!”

Princess just looked at him with red and sore eyes.

“Mummah gib Shadow wastes’ huggie, pwease?” he asked with a sad smile, tearing up too now.

Princess felt herself break down, crying horribly as she hugged him as tightly as she could.

“Mummah am sowwy, babbeh, mummah am su sowwy, mummah wub babbeh su much!” she cried, “Mummah wub ‘ou, wub su much, an’ am su sowwy babbeh!”

Shadow cooed at his mother’s embrace, smiling contently as a single tear ran down his cheek, “Shadow wike mummahs wawm huggies, dis am nice!”

Princess continued to hug Shadow, crying and wailing, repeating that she loved him over and over again as the white light became brighter and engulfed everything, Princess and Shadow fading away into it.

Princess slowly awoke, the heavy and hurtful feeling in her heart having seemingly vanished. Princess prodded herself up, wobbling as she did, noticing Chocolate was next to her helping her steady herself.

“Mu-mummah?” a small voice asked with a shaky tone of fear, peeking over the corner of the bed at her.

Princess saw Sandy, and all of her other babbehs hiding there, not sure if their mother had gone back to normal, still fearful.

Princess felt a surge of happiness at the sight of her children, tearing up again and a big smile forming on her face, “Mummah wuv babbehs, am sowwy fo’ huwties!”

Sandy teared up at her mother’s words, practically jumping over the corner of the bed and into her stomach, hugging it.

“Babbeh wub mummah tu!” Sandy cried, the other foals quickly following, all hugging her and crying.

“Babbehs am sowwy fo’ making mummah angwy, nu do ‘gain!” they cried in unison, Princess quickly intervening.

“Nu say ‘ou am sowwy babbehs, it am mummah fauwt, babbehs du nothin’ wwong!”

This made all the foals cry in happiness, hugging their mother tightly and lovingly. The entire family, Princess, Chocolate, Sandy, Snow, Shade, and Cookie hugging each other crying. Finally, they were all together again and everything was back to normal.

“So, Princess, guess you became the best mummah in the whole world, and thus the best Fluffy in the whole world!” Micheal said, testing her.

“Nu, wan’ be bestes’ mummah an’ bestes’ Fwuffie in dah whowe wowwd!” Princess proclaimed, looking at her family, “Pwincess just wan’ to be bestes’ mummah fo’ babbehs an’ speshuw fwend, not dah whowe wowwd!”

Micheal smiled, his job was over.

Micheal had left the family alone downstairs, having gone up to the kitchen to call Susan and inform her of everything that had happened. Obviously, she was shocked when she heard Princess was a mom now, but she was all too happy to hear that Princess no longer was a massive bitch like before, and that was all thanks to her babies and Chocolate, her special-friend.

Susan happily agreed to take them all in, excited to see her Fluffies mate that was able to change her, and also to see her babies.

Micheal stood at the entrance of his house, Chocolate and Princess standing next to his feet, whilst Micheal carried a small box with their foals inside, happily cheeping at the idea of their new home and human mummah.

Crimson had come to say goodbye, Princess now being aware that Crimson knew she had killed Brownie.

“Cwimson…Pwincess am sowwy!” Princess apologized, lowering her head and gaze in shame, “Pwincess undewstan’ if Cwimson hate Pwincess nao…”

Crimson looked at her. He remembered how sad he had felt when Brownie had died, and how angry he had been knowing Princess had done it. He wanted to punish her and make her go forever-sleepie too just like Brownie is what he had thought back then, but now, he didn’t.

Crimson knew that if Brownie were able to see his thoughts, and what he wanted to do, Brownie would be sad and not want Crimson to do that. He had been too lovely.

“Cwimson hate Pwincess, that am twue, Pwincess gib Bwownie fowebew-sweepies!” Crimson said, Princess flinching but not judging him, accepting his contempt for her, “Buh Cwimson knu’ that Pwincess hab many pwobwems back den and head hurties, an’ Bwownie wouwd hab heawt huwties if knu’, su Cwimson nu wan’ apowogy! Cwimson wan’ Pwincess to be gud mummah to babbehs an’ Speciaw-Fwiend, su Bwownie can be happy skysie!”

Princess looked up at Crimson words, tearing up, but holding herself back from crying.

“Fank 'ou…” Princess thanked Crimson, filled with sadness and happiness.

“Okay, let’s go!” Micheal spoke, walking out into the snow with the Fluffies, opening the car door for them.

Crimson waved to them as Micheal lifted the Fluffies into his car and drove off. Crimson sat at the front door for a bit, feeling snowflakes land on his nose and melting, almost feeling like a cold lick.

Crimson looked up into the sky, snowflakes falling down without any signs of stopping, “Gudbwye, Bwownie! Wub ‘ou!” He smiled, walking back inside and closing the door, locking the cold out.

-2 Days later-

Winter was now fully here, and the constant snowfall had created a thick layer on the ground, alongside a thin but strong layer of ice making the grass in the garden practically inedible and unreachable. The green Stallion sighed in despair, his stomach growling badly from hunger.

It had been 3 days now since he had last eaten, and he was so incredibly hungry. The little amount of food he had been able to get he had given to Lavender to eat so she could make milk for their babbehs. Lavender had allowed him back into their nest due to it having become even colder and thus needing his warmth to stay warm herself, especially at night.

However, the foals were the ones who had it the worst. The milk they had been drinking had never been enough to fully fill their tiny bellies and lacked many nutrients that a newborn foal needed to grow big and strong, thus the babbehs were weak and thin, only being able to cheep and peep in discomfort at the cold and hunger filling their stomachs and bodies.

The green Stallion had also become angrier at Lavender in the past few days, due to her prioritizing feeding the monster babbeh over the one that looked like him, the bestest babbeh.

Today was such a day again, Lavender eating the disgusting grass he had brought her, swallowing it with great effort, placing both the small purple Alicorn colt and black Pegasus filly on her teats first, leaving the small green Unicorn colt peep in hunger at the smell of the milk he was craving.

The green Stallion watched in disgust and hatred as the Alicorn foal fed on his mother’s limited milk, the green Unicorn colt peeping desperately, suddenly letting out a small “M-miwkies! T-tummy-huwties!”

This made the green Stallion see red, as he quickly pranced up to Lavender, with a quick and precise smack throwing the Alicorn colt off his mother’s teat and onto the cold hard ground. Lavender looking in horror as her small babbeh flew across the nest.

The foal crashed hard on the ground, now crying in pain as it tried to move its front left leg, it hurting whenever he tried moving it.

“PEEP! CHIRP! M-MUMMAH! PEEP! HUWTIES! CHEEP!” the small Alicorn colt cried heavily.

Lavender was too stunned to move as she saw her Special-Friend placed the hungry green Unicorn colt on her teat, it at once starting to greedily gulp down the remaining milk, which was barely anything, the Stallion then making his way to the Alicorn colt.

As he towered over his crying baby, it slowly and painfully opened its eyes due to the pain, wanting to see what hurt so much, seeing his father standing above him, hoof in the air.

“Da-daddeh?” It happily chirped whilst teary eyed.

The hoof rushing down upon it.

“NUUUUUU!” Lavender screamed in terror as she sprung up, throwing her feeding foals off and onto the ground, rushing towards her Special-Friend, ramming head first into his side as hard as she could.

CRACK

The Stallion was thrown to his side, landing hard on an ice cold rock, a sharp pain suddenly piercing his other side making him gasp in pain.

“DUMMEH STAWWION NU TOUCH BABBEH!” Lavender screamed at him as she picked up her foal, which nuzzled into her chest, crying.

The Stallion painfully lifted himself of the ground, his chest hurting immensely as he had sustained four broken ribs during the impact and landing. He wobbled and stumbled around a bit as he stood up, breathing heavily from the pain.

“DUMMEH MAWE!” he screamed at her, making Lavender flinch

He signaled towards the green foal, “’OU PWOTECTIN’ MUNSTAH BABBEH AN’ IGNOWIN’ BESTES’ BABBEH! NU MOWE!”

He started walking towards Lavender, rage in his eyes, “Stawwion gib munsta babbeh an’ bwack babbeh fowebew-sweepies, den mummah wiww gib aww miwkies to bestes’ babbeh!”

Lavender released a squirt of shit out of fear as the Stallion rushed towards her head first, trying to ram her in the chest, hurting her and killing the Alicorn foal at the same time. Before he was able to make contact though, Lavender threw the Alicorn colt to the side and away from the attack, but instead getting hit head first in the ribcage.

CRACK

She gasped hard and in pain as she felt it crack, landing hard on her back, breathing rapidly, each breath sending a shock of pain through her already weak body. The colt landed hard on the floor again, crying.

“PEEP! MUMMAH! CHIRP! BABBEH HAB HUWTIES!” it cried, not noticing his dad slowly walking up behind him, breathing hard.

The Stallion lungs were screaming in pain and each step only made it worse.

“MUNSTAH BABBEH GU FOWEBEW-SWEEPIES!” he screamed, crashing his hoof down on the foal.

TEAR

“SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!” The Stallion suddenly screamed though as a surge of pain ran up his spine from his tail, missing the foal by an inch and instead crashing his hoof into the ground.

CRACK

His hoof cracked wide open, “REEEEEEEEE!” he screamed at the new pain, falling forward.

He stared at his hoof, warm fresh blood running out of it and revealing nerves underneath the nail that should normally never be exposed. His hoof was throbbing and incredibly painful, when suddenly the pain from his back appeared again.

He was crying now, turning around to see what had happened, seeing Lavender behind him on the ground breathing hard, a trail of blood going from his back to her mouth on the ground as she held his ripped off tail between her teeth.

Before he was able to understand what was happening and had happened, Lavender jumped up with in great pain, crashing her hoof into the Stallions stomach as hard as she could, making him flinch forward, Lavender biting down hard on his ear.

“SCREEEE! WET GUUUUU!” He screamed, when Lavender suddenly fell backwards, his ear hanging in her mouth.

The Stallion fell backwards, clutching his head, screaming pain as blood rushed down his face, staining his pretty green fluff red. Lavender took this opportunity, running over to her still crying Alicorn colt and then black Pegasus filly, snatching them both up with her mouth and quickly placing them on her back.

“HUU! HUU! Head hab wowstes’ huwties!” The Stallion cried in pain, lifting himself back up, seeing Lavender standing there with both of the foals on her back, noticing she had left the small green Unicorn colt on the ground.

Now he was mad.

Lavender quickly ran as the Stallion got up, screaming at her in rage rushing towards her, barely missing her as she ran out the bush and into the garden. Her foals were crying desperately on her back as they held onto her fur with their life on the line.

Lavender was in incredible pain as she ran, feeling like puking, but she kept running, aiming for the big glass door at the house.

The human, the one who was always the biggest threat to the family, her special-friend, her babbehs, and herself was now her only salvation and way to life. She painstakingly ran up the wooden stairs, her lungs feeling like they were about to burst, the Stallion right behind her.

She slammed herself, belly first, against the glass door, desperately hitting it with her hoofs in a desperate attempt to let the human hear her.

“SCREEE!” Lavender screamed as she was painfully pulled by her tail, the Stallion holding it in his mouth.

The Stallion had caught up to her, leaving behind a trail of blood in the white snow and up to the door.

“Dummeh mawe wan’ num taiwie?” he asked, with rage filled eyes, “Den Stawwion num dummeh mawe taiwie!”

CRUNCH

CRUNCH

CRUNCH

“SCCCCCRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!” Lavender screamed at the top of her lungs dropping on her stomach as the Stallion began to chew on her tail and pull at the same time, the bones breaking and shattering underneath his bite, with skin and fluff peeling off.

He kept chewing as Lavender flailed around in pain, her mind becoming fuzzy and woozy from the pain, blood starting to run down her tail and into the Stallions mouth, dropping to the ground.

He finally stopped, her tail mutilated, bleeding, and having so much skin and fluff scraped off that it revealed bone underneath. He licked the blood of his mouth, his eyes going wide and a smile forming on his face.

“Dummeh mawe nu nee’ taiwie, buh Stawwion nee’ nummies!” he sneered, biting back down on her tail, this time much harder, severing it clean off.

“SCRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! NNUUUUUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEHHHHHH!” she screamed in agony, tears and snot starting to freeze on her face, a bit of drool running out her mouth as she laid there, exhausted, hurt, and unable to move.

The Stallion crunched down on the tail, crushing bone, skin, and fluff as he did. Having eaten nothing for 2 days, her tail tasted amazing. He gulped, swallowing. He was in bliss, finally having something filling his stomach, as his gaze suddenly turned on the two foals on her back, clinging to each other and their mother, crying and chirping in fear at the screams and noises.

“Mowe nummies!” he sneered, Lavender immediately realizing what he was talking about as he grabbed the small Alicorn colt by his scruff hard, the small foal pissing and shitting in fear.

“NU! BABBEH NU AM NUMMIES!” The Alicorn foal cried as it dangled there, realizing what his father wanted to do.

“Nu am nummies?” The Stallion asked.

“HUU! HUU! Yesh, a-am smaww babbeh, n-nu am num-nummies!” it replied, crying heavily, choking up on its own tears and having a hard time breathing.

The Stallion let go, the foal crashing into the wooden ground, landing on his face.

“HUU! HUU! BABBEH HAB HUWTIES! MUMMAH! MUMMAH BABBEH NEE’ HUGGIES!” it cried for Lavender, she just watching with tears streaming down her face, unable to do anything.

“Babbeh nu am nummies?” The Stallion grunted, “Nu cawe!”

He slowly approached the baby, taking one his wings into his mouth, the colt wiggling as it felt its fathers tongue on his wing, desperately trying to run away.

CHOMP

RIP

The wing came clean off as the Stallion bit down and pulled back, blood flowing down the small foals back, as it screamed, “SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! WINGIE HAB HUWTIES!”

“HUUU! HUUU! MUMMAH!” the small purple Pegasus filly peeped on Lavenders back, “MUMMAH, BWUDDAH NEE’ MUMMAH HEWPIES!”

Lavender just closed her eyes, accepting there was nothing she could do to stop him, crying as she accepted her and her babbehs fate.

The Smarty chewed quickly, wanting to eat the foal quickly as to stop the screaming, but as the Stallion was able to swallow the glass door slid open. The Smarty stopped chewing as it looked in fear at the human standing there, looking at the chaos in front of him.

Lavender weakly opened her eyes, looking up the human, “Pwease…pwease nice mistuh…pwease hewp mummah an’ babbehs!”

“The fuck is going on here?” Micheal uttered loudly, seeing the carnage, the ripped off body parts on the Fluffies, the countless blood all over his terrace floor, and the line of blood leading from the bush to the door.

The Stallion quickly spit out the chewed up wing. What a shame, the Stallion thought to himself before turning his attention to the human.

“Dummeh hooman go 'way, dis am…” The Stallion shouted at Micheal as Micheal’s foot ripped into the Stallions face.

The Stallion didn’t know what had happened. He was just now shouting at the dumb human there, but now he was seeing the white sky and clouds. What happened?

The Stallion thought to himself as he landed on the frozen garden ground.

CRASH

He couldn’t move. He just laid there as the human picked Lavender up, along with her foals, and carried them inside quickly, shouting for someone.

The Stallion glanced over to the bush, remembering his bestest babbeh. He tried shouting for the human, wanting to tell him to also take his bestest babbeh into the warm house, but only a weak wheeze left his mouth, and his lungs had no more strength in them left.

He felt the cold starting to crawl all over him, eating away at the little bit of warmth he had left inside him, penetrating him inside as he was unable to move. His vision was starting to blur, his heart now feeling cold too. The cold even penetrating through his eyes and into his head, which gave him immense pain.

The Stallion could hear peeps and chirps coming from the bush, “CHIRP! Da-daddeh! PEEP! Bestes’ babbeh hab tummy-huwties! PEEP! Gib miwkies nao! CHEEP! mummah, gib miwkies to bestes’ babbeh nao!”

The Stallion felt proud, his bestest baby was a talkie-babbeh now too, but he needed milkies from mu…from mummah…MUMMAH?

His eyes sprung open in horror as suddenly remembered Lavender having been brought inside, leaving his best babbeh outside. His babbeh talking had made him forget that for a second, but now he had remembered again, and he had to listen as his babbeh cried and cried for milkies for bestest babbeh.

His heart cried as he was lying there, unable to do a thing as he heard his babbeh cries becoming quieter as time went by, he himself feeling weakening and colder too as the sun slowly began to sink.

The last thing the Stallion heard before it all went dark was, “Du-dummeh daddeh, bwin’ miwkies fo’ be-bestes’ babbeh!” weakly cheeping in the distance, clearly sounding distressed and very hungry, yet still demanding.

Then it went black.

END OF SEASON 1

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I do hope we don’t see Princess again, I think she’s passed the need for discipline and now is in need of a fuckton of therapy.

I was wondering where this feral pair was leading, I did not expect the cannibalism but after starvation and frustration it makes senses. Here’s hoping the dude hasn’t picked up a taste for Fluffy meat although that might make for an interesting case for Michael.

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Oh yeah, Princess’s Arc and Storyline is over from here on out. She has had her moment and spotlight during S1, but now its other Fluffies turn! :smiley:

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I need to work out a story to crossover Michael with my character Josef, mostly because I think it’ll be funny to see Michael’s Crimson interact with Josef’s Crimson.

Talk about opposite ends of the spectrum for those two.

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I really loved your story about Joseph (I vividly remember reading it like a year or so ago and loved it!) and yeah I think a crossover would be funny af xD

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Oh my goodness I have a great idea for season 2

Let the smarty and his baby survive but show them how his former mate and children have it better than him.I want him to be punished and maybe forced to see his best baby be a servant to his other children.

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Damn… that was a rollercoaster of emotions reading that. I almost teared up at the end with Princess and Chocolate and her foals going home with her owner now matured and better. Then BAM you hit me with suspense and thriller with the ferals. Now its revealed the green colt has become a smarty baby and I feel bad for the alicotn get his wing chewed off… maybe he could be called Icarus or Seth cuz it sounds like Sephiroth the one winged guy in Final Fantasy 7.

Oooooh what if the green best babbeh and the alicorn battle not in a pit fight but moreso cuz of the sins of the father n whatnot

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I’m happy you liked the season finally :grin:

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A great end for the season. At least Princess learned her lesson, and the shithead smarty got what he deserved. Hopefully he stays gone.

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As much as I’d like him to have winter take him and his talkie brat foal… that would be too good for them. Besides they might be able to live off grass for now

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They might make a return in Season 2, might also not o-O

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Who knows… or maybe the stallion will die and the colt will go Revanent on him and use him as a sleeping bag and become a cannibal fluffy living off their own father in the winter…

WTF Why did my brain think of that F-ed up thing?!

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xDDDD

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“Babbeh fot daddeh smeww bad… on da ousside.”

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“Bestes’ babbeh am cowd, daddeh inside am wawm!” - digs into fathers stomach

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Okay that was good XD :rofl:

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I choose to believe Princess hallucinated Shadow, and that both murdered foals will haunt her forever. Please note that I’ve been told that my need for justice borders on pathological, so… XD

Nice end for the Outdoor Family! I kinda hope the new smarty feeds his bestest on blood so it develops a taste for the stuff. It would certainly make for unique results. Poor Lavender and the other foals need sketti and a rest, and possibly a police report and restraining order. Yikes.

Looking forward to more! Especially Crimson and the foals. He needs a partner worthy of him. :sparkling_heart:

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It was a great season I loved how you introduced Lavander and seeing how she protected the alicorn tooth and nail The truth was a great rain of feelings for me when reading this work I came to think that the alicorn would die but seeing that they were rescued I am really glad I was captivated by your story and that of the princess was sublime as she went from being a monster to a mother who loves her foals and chocolate is a love thank you I will wait for the second season and thank you for bringing this work.

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Oh yeah this is the good shit. Physicality is always fun in abuse but I agree my favorite is the psychological aspect. I loved Princess’ arc, how she got better then worse because of circumstances that weren’t really her fault (Chocolate being gone) and then those feelings not being dealt with well (her murdering Shadow). It also works as a great allegory for real life parent-child relationships! I hope Princess is now a slightly damaged but good hearted mummah :slight_smile:

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Good show! Fun how as the situation grew more desperate, the feral stallion was turning full smarty. He’s toast for and Bestest Babbeh is a foalcicle for sure, but I’m definitely interested in where this goes next.

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