Thatās right mother-enfers, Papa Poopiest is doing comics now too! (sometimes)
Iāll be updating this comic three pages at a time.
Feedback is always welcome and I hope you enjoy.
Niiiiiiceeee
āBecause fuck you thatās why!ā havenāt seen that in a while
Great work!
You can never go wrong with a classic.
Glad you like it so far. Never did a comic before, so I hope the formatting is decent, at least.
This comic is going to be so peak!
Learning and trying new things never hurt as you do it for yourself first and foremost.
Is it weird if I said that foal is likeā¦the dumbest little critter I have ever seen-
Lil guy doesnāt even react to a tube up the bum. Absolutely zero going on in the brain.
Ah some good foal torture, just what the doctor ordered.
Page 3 pure -cheff kiss- primo burger stuff right there
donāt you worry, heāll start reacting soon enough.
Thanks! I felt pretty happy with how much motion and impact I was able to get in that panel.
āfucking-slapā should be a tag.
why is this comic unironically my personal view of life (the whole ābecause fuck you, thatās whyā thing)
Itās not the worst personal philosophy, but it most definitely is the philosophy of the fluffy community as a whole.
I love the attention to detail, like the tiny purple genitalia in Panel 3 of Page 2.
Iām glad someone noticed. heās got a tiny little zip tie on his junk. If he canāt urinate then he canāt elevate the build up.
Itās going to get really gnarly by part 4 or 5.
Whoa, I see the zip tie now. I probably need to go to Specsavers soon though.
Again, another problem solvable with superglue by sealing either the urethral meatus or the foreskin closed (depending on your personal headcanon on fluffy anatomy), as sealing the entire scrotal sac is just asking for death by gangrene.
That said, I would think that Lionel is going to die sooner from being unable to urinate (burst bladder) than gangrene or even the pressure build up in the GI tract, assuming Lemonada doesnāt panic and hammers the button.
This is going to be one of those ādisregard for the purposes of the storyā things, so Iām not going to let it disrupt my enjoyment of Lemonadaās and Lionelās shared suffering.
The real suspension of disbelief comes from finding a zip tie that small lol
As a general feedback for your artwork, youād want to have your action and reaction a bit more on level to one another. Like the smack, with the fluffy seemingly barely react to it, would lesson the impact from it. Putting the reaction in all caps like the smack sound effect will deliver the effect you want better.
thatās fair, I thought about that in retrospect after uploading it.