Here’s finally page 3/5 of chapter 07!
Should Josef tell Sweetheart about it ? I wouldn’t :d!
Original story by @BFM101
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Prepare yourselves folks.
It only gets sadder from here on out.
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But don’t worry, only the fluffies suffer,
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It’s better to be one with the ground than being a poopie babbeh.
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That part of the story why I hated that psycho bastard 
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Always good to see a loving fluffy stallion, even if the circumstances are heartbreaking.
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Tip for next time from someone you know is a fan: including the descriptions from the original text verbatim is not always necessary in a visual adaptation. There are a lot of times you can show without telling. It’s why you’d want pictures in the first place.
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there’s too much text to adapt, and it I was gonna adapt every single detail that happened it would have like 90 pannels per page, so it has to be like that sometimes.
I also prefer to use texts like that to indicate that the narrator is also talking to whoever is reading the story like the whole thing is a tale being told.
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Aw heck, I guess I know all that. I just meant in places like…
Crimson was salivating by just seeing that mare. Heh, what a monster…
Your art shows that exact part so well that the words feel redundant. Maybe it’s just because I already read the story, though!
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Nah I see the point now and I agree with you at that
thank you!
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Yep. your great at stories i think i cried reading one once. Not sure tho lol
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Hahaha the stupid mare get what she deserves.