One in a Miwwion (Imp Story) Part 2 [Final] -GooGooDa

Part 1 (Here)!

This is my second try at writing this, I added a LOT more context for things and had a lot more fun this time! Enjoy!!!

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Poo discussed the events that transpired that day between sobs.

“Huuuhuuu! Poo am sowwy!!! Meanie munstah taek bestes’ Speshul!!”

Apple looked at Poo in Shock, he couldn’t blame her for anything, she was left all alone to the elements, and was a first time mummah. With Apple knowing about her bad decisions so far he couldn’t help but feel responsible for their current situation, still, losing a child was a heavy blow to him as a father…

“Nu am Speshul Fwien’s fault… Apple am awae aww bwight time… am wowstest daddeh!!” Apple closed his tired eyes, the guilt kept washing over him… He’d been gone all day, of course a meanie munstah got one of his children…

Instead of accepting her responsability on the matter however, Poo took Apple’s words as absolute truth, OF COURSE she wasn’t at fault! Babbehs should be playing outside! Apple was a stupid dummeh for being out all day gathering nummies! How hard could it be anyway? And the nummies weren’t even that good.

“Appew nee’ fin’ nummies fastew!! Mummah nu am saef!!!”

Apple hung his head down in shame, accepting his duty he looked at Poo with sadness in his eyes.

“Speshul fwen am wight… nee’ fin’ new nestie… we weave nao.”

This took Poo by susprise, she didn’t want to leave her comfy little nest! All of this because the Dummy Ugly Babbeh had to be so repulsive the monster didn’t want it, at least that was Poo’s train of thought.

As for Apple…

“(Am gun’ be gud daddeh… nu wet nu mow babbehs gu 'way!)” He thought to himself; A change of location wouldn’t be safe, but now Munstahs supposedly knew where they were, and in case these Munstahs are capable of using magic… It’s best to not even think about it.

“Nuu! Nu wan wawkies! Nestie saef!”

“Gud daddeh am gun pwotect babbehs an’ gud mummah! Dun wowwy speshul fwen.”

“Huuhuu… bu’ nu wan…”

Poo knew what she had waiting for her.

Walking; She absolutelly dreaded the damn activity, she loved becoming a soon mummah because she never had to walk or leave her nestie… Outside was always so cold, the ground annoyed her with all the fresh green icky nummies.

And now she had to leave her nestie and WALK!? Yet she knew at least that she should follow Apple, even though from her eyes he looked like an incompetent father, she followed his advice because it usually led to her survival.

Five hours later

It had been what felt like a century, Poo kept walking, daddeh had her babbehs in his back and was enduring the cold wind, they had to stop multiple times before getting this far.

They had actually only walked about one kilometer (About half a mile) to this point, which was still quite impressive for a fluffy in the cold. Poo collapsed on the cold grass, her body tired and sore from the strain, then she heard Apple yell.

Gasp “Gud nestie!!!” Apple ran ahead, forgetting his special friend and charging for a sillhouette, he recognized this shape, it was a small tree with no leaves in it, about 6 feet in height total, this tree species usually formed a hollow hole beneath it’s trunk, the hole formed between the roots was big enough for Fluffies and offered great insulation too.

Apple knew this tree, he’d been given birth to in a tree just like this one. This tree usually has symbiotic relationship with a few different species of animals, they’d usually leave their food there and the tree would digest the food over time, always leaving the food safe enough for consumption though, having only half-digested it.

This however wouldn’t happen to Fluffies the tree had enough nutrients on the soil, and most important, the digestion was a magic process, which was cut off by Fluffies’ natural Antimagic coat.

This meant it was a perfect place for a nest. Apple didn’t know all these facts about the tree, but he knew safety when he saw it…

“Babbehs be saef, appew gu bak fow mummah!”

Apple left his children and came back to help his special friend, he dragged poo by her mane until she got up, and then helped her back to the tree, where they would go into their new nest and cuddle with their children.

Apple however did notice before getting in, what looked like a massive pillar of water in the distance, standing still and reaching the heavens, he thought he’d keep it to himself, wawa is bad for fluffies, but as long as he didn’t provoke the meanie wawa, it would probably leave him alone.

The next few days would go by slowly, Apple took care of his children and sang “Daddeh songs” to them, they were just “Mummah songs” but with Daddeh in place of Mummah.

However, these days were absolute hell for Poo.

She had to endure the muscle pain for the walkies she did before.

She had to endure the yucky green nummies apple had her eat so he could stay with his children at home. Of course Apple also ate grass but she was a Mummah so she shouldn’t have to!

And worst of all, she spent every day in fear of the creepy wawa in the distance, the pilar of water would give her nightmares where she was drowning nonstop! To her wild fluffy imagination however, drowing just felt like getting slightly wet, still in her nightmares it was terrifying!

Though her long suffering would finally be worth it when her children opened their eyes and uttered their first words.

"Mummah... wub..." her no name babbeh spoke first, Daddeh was deeply moved, but Poo didn’t really give a shit. Ignoring her completely.

“Coo…” Followed by Pink Babbeh.

“YAAEY!!! PINK BABBEH SU SMAWT! SPOWK FIWST!” Poo declared in deep joy.

“Speshul fwen, coo nu am wowdsie-”

“Eee”

Gasp “pwetty gween babbeh! SU SMAWT”

Pwetty Gween Babbeh couldn’t possibly speak normaly, it was a classic case of SBS, though the parents couldn’t tell yet.

And Fwen had yet to utter his first words.

Later, at night…

“Mummah wub all babbehs! Fwen nu talkie yet bu’ guu’ babbeh too!” Poo sang without an ounce of tone on her; Even though her song wasn’t as nice as his Mummah’s, a Mummah’s song never fails to make a Fluffy feel cozy, and as such, Apple soon fell asleep.

"Yeah bro, let me tell ya, that basilisk was CRAZY big..."

Poo suddenly heard a voice outside.

“Hoomins?” Poo could feel a plan hatching in her tiny brain, she took Fwen, her pretty red baby and put it on her back, hoping to give it a better life than growing up to eat yucky green nummies. She knew Apple would oppose to it because he was a DUMMY so she just left without talking to him, trying not to disturb his sleep.

She went outside, scuttering in the dark in the Hoomin’s direction, the Fluffies were quite accustomed to walking in the dark so Poo had no issues in getting close to the human.

The random human only heard the sound of something walking on the grass behind him, makimg him startled. So lifting up his right hand he created a bright flame.

"WHOS OUT THERE!? SHOW YOURSELF!" Any person in a world with magical beasts won’t take a random sound at night as a pleasant surprise, he charged his spell and chanted it’s name.

“Huu!! Scawwy!!!” Poo screeched quietly to herself as the human threw out a fire based [Arcane Bullet], her small child uttered it’s first words as it fell out his terrified mother’s back and got swiftly engulfed by flames.

Knowing no other word to scream it’s last words were:

“WUB!”

"Huh? What was- EWW Smells like shit! Im out!"

As the adventurer felt the rancid smell of burned Fluffy on his nostrils, he quickly scampered away, satisfied with not knowing what he’d just hit.

Poo of course, ran back to her homesie and shook and cried until falling asleep. She would huhuuu as quietly as she could in order not to wake Apple up, her dead child’s first word echoing in her head, filling her with sorrow.

When the next morning came however, Apple found their child’s charred corpse, Poo didn’t take the blame, having now realised how badly she fucked up, she instead just started bawling her eyes out.

“Huuhuuu, wai Fwen gu foweba sweepies? Am onwy widdle babbeh…”

Apple didn’t understand what had just happened, he turned his attention to Poo instead, even though he knew Fwen couldn’t have left the nestie on his own, he kept those thoughts to himself, for the sake of his family.

With 3 children left, No Name, Pink Babbeh and Pwetty Gween Babbeh. Apple knew he had to be twice as vigilant.

And so he started trying to stay awake at night. It worked just fine for him, though he did notice he felt less strong if he didn’t sleep or eat properly, doing so was the best way to keep his family safe, even if smarter than average, Apple was still a Fuffly after all.

One week after Apple had started his no sleep bad eating regime, their babbehs were finally already walking, even if it was more of a waddle than a walk.

And they could now speak properly, their momentary peace would bring peace to Apple, and so he would try to sleep before being interrupted by Poo’s screaming.

Getting up fast he ran outside his home and stood in front of Poo, trying to look big to whatever menace he’d be dealing with, even though with his lack of proper nutrition and sleep, he was looking smaller than Poo right now.

A hungry mother fox had found their nest and started predatimg around it, Apple stood guard outside time and time again, whenever he felt sleepy again however, the fox would get a bit closer, making poo scream and awakening Apple all over again.

Apple had told Poo to stay in the nest so she wouldn’t get hurt, but Poo decided to peek out at them anyway.

Whenever the fox saw Poo, with her two babbehs on her back, it snarled at her, making her even more scared.

Poo didn’t peek out by chance, she was in fact, looking for the chance to run away with her two remaining Bestest Babbehs, Pwetty Gween and Pink Babbeh. But one of the times when she saw the fox snarl at her? Instinct took over.

“NUU! SCAWWY MUNSTAH!”

Poo bolted in the opposite direction of the fox and her special friend, Apple, having been sleep deprived, barely had any time to react as the fox lunged forward and jumped on top of Poo.

Poo shat herself on contact, leaving the fox disoriented enough that she couldn’t target Poo directly.

No name, still beneath the tree, having been left behind by ber Mummah, looked out and saw her father run away in the fox’s direction, leaving the front of the nest unprotected. She crawled to the entrance of the nest while screaming.

"Nuuu! Nu weabe babbeh!"

The Fox, hearing the Lone filly’s scream, turned to her, ready to attack, but her father stepped in front of her to protect her, and so the Fox did the next best thing, she clenched her teeth around Pwetty Gween Babbeh, who’d been left on the floor after Poo and the Fox’s scramble.

Pwetty Gween Babbeh’s fat SBS body would serve as nice sustenance for her offspring.

“EEEEEEEEP!!!”

The foal screamed, with it being bigger now the fox was unable to kill it in a single bite, and it would later be devoured still alive by her children at her burrow.

But for now, the Fox ran in the direction of Poo, who stumbled back, falling on something soft out of fear of the fox. The fox however, would escape satisfied, never to return.

“SPESHUL FWEN NUU!”

“Aieee…”

“Oopsies!” Poo got up, removing herself from above Pink Babbeh.

Pink Babbeh’s entire backside was crushed by her mother’s weight. Poo hugged her tight, trying to make the hurties go away, but they just got even worse.

“OUCHIES! Wai mummah huwt babbeh, am onwy widdle babbeh huuhuuu!” Pink Babbeh said, her voice raspy and strained from pain.

Apple had a somber look in his face, he knew his baby wouldn’t last long with her underside crushed.

“Nu name babbeh, gu back inside…” No name hid inside their nestie at the command, she’d never seen her father like that…

“Bad mummah”

Poo looked at Apple mid hug, her face full of shock from the words that came out of her special friend’s mouth.

“W-whu?”

Apple however, with hatred in his voice, would hold back no more.

“YU AM BAD MUMMAH! POO AM BAD MUMMAH! GIB AWW BABBEHS FOWEBA SWEEPIES!”

Poo, having no defense against the statements, just started bawling immediatelly.

“N-NUU! AM GUUD MUMMAH! APPEW AM BAD FWUFFY NU CAN PWOTECT HEWD!”

Poo started shouting, she’d never once heard Apple call her by her ugly real name, it made so many memories come back, awful memories.

“APPEW KNO YU TAKE SPESHUL OU’ FOW PWAYSIES! APPEW KNU YU TAEK FWEN OU’ AT DAWK TIMESIES, APPEW NU AM A STOOPI’ DUMMEH BAD FWUFFY LIKE POO!!!”

“HuuhuuUU! Liaw! Am guud mummah!”

As if to prove her point, Poo showed Pink Babbeh, only to realise she had already gone forever sleepies, having lost too much blood to internal bleeding.

“POO NU EBEN WEAWISE BABBEH AM FOWEBA SWEEPIES, ONWY BABBEH AWIBE AT NESTIE CAUS POO HAET HEW!!! POO KIWW EVEWYFIN POO WUB!! AM WOWSTEST MUMMAH!!!”

“SCREEEE!!!”

Poo launched herself forward, having had more sleep and food, and being far heavier, she overwhelmed apple by ramming her bloated body on him, hitting his nose with her skull so hard that it caved his nose into his brain. Which No Name saw happen.

Poo turned to her no name child and picked her up by the scruff with her teeth.

"DADDEH NU!! BAD UPSIES!!!"

Poo threw her no name babbeh on her back, no, this wouldn’t do…

“Humph! Ugwy babbeh nyu namesie am UGWY!”

Ugwy could only cover her eyes with her hooves and cry with her little golden colored eyes, rejecting what had happened to her father.

Poo had her own plans, she gathered all the courage she had and moved on to the huge water pillar in the distance, that much water, it should be enough to get rid of her no good ugly monster babbeh…

Poo gleefully endured an hour of walking, enjoying her daughter’s pleas for mercy and for her daddeh.

"Huuhuuu! Nu wan go tu meanie wawa.."

“Wowstes ugwy babbeh get fowebah sweepies fwom wawa! Wawa fowebah sweepies am wowstest fowebah sweepies!”

"Nuuu! huuhuuhuuuuuu!"

After the long hour, Poo finally arrived at the water pillar, it was like a giant waterfall, coming from the solid ground and going up into the sky, Poo grabbed Ugwy in her hooves, and like Frodo tossing the ring into a volcano she launched Ugwy at the water.

The water send Ugwy up, and her bones began being crushed by the meanie water, she could feel it filling her lungs too, the worstest pain she’d ever felt.

The water was usually pretty harmless, it was usually only crossed by humans, but to a Fluffy, it was strong enough to rip their skin off slowly.

"NUUUUUUU!!!"

She screamed silently and turned back time just a second, but Poo just launched her at the water again. The returned time unable to stop her actions.

"SCREEEEEEEEEE!"

She turned back time one last time, and could feel the exhaustion before her mother even threw her, doing it just once had exhausted her as a chirpy, but even though she had grown more she was DYING now, from how physically exhausting doing this was to her!

As her mother prepared to throw her on the water one last time, she felt her grip loosen and she felt on her mother’s back again.

“SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! WOWSTEST HUWTIES WAI!??”

Poo laid down, her upstretched front legs had just been cut off, but why?

Unknown to Poo, this wasn’t just a meanie water pillar.

Known to mages as the Extreme Elemental Zone, it was a place that connected the Water Plane to this earthy plane. And was often used by mages who desired to reach it.

With the commotion, and the use of accidental high level time manipulation on Ugwy’s part, one of such mages was able to notice Poo’s actions.

In front of Poo stood a lone blond human woman wearing heavy tactical ops gear, holding a long Guan Dao, with pale skin and black tattoos like branches blooming with flowers across her face.

"I was wondering what was going on with the time rewinding, but I didnt expect this?" Fluffies were unable to feel the powerful grip of a Fluffy Imp on the forces of Chaos making time rewing, but a Human Imp could, and quite easily.

"H-hewp Ugwy..."

"Will do"

“HUUU! WAI HUWT GUD MUMMA-”
Poo’s eyes rolled back as her back legs were cleaved off. She was forced down on her stumps as the cold grass brushed against her bare flesh.

“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!”

The lady took Ugwy on her hands, it looked quite weak now, so she latched the filly onto her mother’s tits to suck her milk.

“Nu taek Miwkies!! AM FOW GUD BABBEHS!”

"I dont see any other around though?"

“HUUHUU MEANIE HOOMIN! MUMMAH HAECHU! HAECHU!”

"Too bad, this little girl here seems like quite a catch, youre a Fluffy right? I think thats what they called you creatures back home... Im having you give this little one milk until Im back though."

The lady took Ugwy out of her old bleeding mother’s teat, being careful not to overfeed her.

"You know, Imps feel fluctuations in the Chaos released by all living things in the air. So I pretty much got the gist of all that was happening to you."

"Nu- nu undewstan... pwease hewp Ugwy"

Ugwy said, still shaking, she was a bit afraid of the human and didn’t understand her words, but still felt safe near her, how weird…

"Sure, Ill get you a new name later Superstar..."

"Supawstaw! Fwuffy wub nyu namesies!"

"Haha! Good enough!"

The lady took Superstar and her crying, shivering mother and walked away into the sunset…

One week later

The Lady who adopted Superstar laid down on her bed, checking her texts, then suddenly jumped up.

"Hey SS! Your daddy is going to be fine! He only had a tiny concussion"

Superstar jumped up in glee, having realised it really DID work when she wished her daddeh didn’t get forever sleepies.

"Your rewind is quite powerful, even I can only do like, two per day at most. You must be one in a million little girl."

"Your rewind is quite powerful, even I can only do like, two per day at most. You must be a one in a million case little girl."

Superstar, as she was now known, had saver her father’s life by redoing the action of her mother’s strike on him, she just broke a few of his bones, but he’d been found and rehabilitated thanks to the mysterious lady’s actions

"Supawstaw nu undewstan mummah, bu weally happeh!!"

SS did a little dance standing on her back hooves. She was happier than ever before, feeling thankful for her new life.

"Youre almost weaned now huh? Are you sure you dont want me to keep your mummah?"

Superstar stopped her dancies to look down in shame, but she was still terrified of her mother, remembering her as a voiceless milkbag in the other room, even though she needed her mother’s milk she could always feel her hatred whenever she drank it, her mother would always shake with anger as well while she did it.

"Okay okay, no need to say it, I know how hard it is for you..."

"D-dank yu mummah"

Her owner knew what abusers would do to a poopie milkbag pillowfluff but really didn’t care, Superstar had told her about the actions of her mother and later she would know even more from apple.

Later that week Poo would go away forever, transformed into a litterpal and left to live that way for years more to come in a Fluffy daycare, never again having children to kill.

The End

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Yes, excellent ending for a shit mummah!

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I hope this story was good, I just have such a hard time reading stories written exclusively from fluffy perspective I trail off

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XD, same tbh, writing this felt so hard. Probably due to that.

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