Part 3 of this roller coaster of a story is finally here thanks to Nundevwizer!
As always I recomend reading the original story since we get more in-character’s detail of what they are feeling or thinking!
I do have to tsk tsk all those people who are ignoring the yellow fluffy. They should either rescue it, call someone to rescue it, or brutally and responsibly end the pathetic and environmentally devastating life of that fluffy.
Unfortunately they didn’t, and so it will breed again.
I dunno, the pink unicorn’s story is already being written but since these were commission I’m not sure about it, I recomend reading it in the meanwhile tho
I always enjoy the one-two punch of fluffy helplessness and cluelessness. She assumes the pink one is dead because she can’t see it anymore. Out of sight, out of mind.
Yellow and Scarface impressed me. Legit thoughtful, intelligent fluffies? Will wonders never cease?
I’m also surprised the mare didn’t wake up mid-thrust. You’d think she would. I wonder if the blue one is the actual food-stealing culprit, and she will be swept up in the accusations because the herd assumes she is his willing accomplice/special friend. I also think it would be interesting to see a fluffy’s brain breaking at the idea of getting pregnant with no father (that she’s aware of). How would a fluffy’s mind process the notion of immaculate conception?
Edit: I read the text story and saw that the rapist stallion is fixed. I guess we won’t get to explore the weirdbox potential of a fluffy thinking she’s the biotoy version of the Virgin Mary.
I like how with the smarty we can immediately see that he isn’t a monster like most are based on him actually being sensitive to the one-eyed one’s feelings. Either that or Scarface is a fluffy badass and he is scared of him. Either way is fun.