he plays a little lie to Bubblegum, telling her, she was gonna have babies but he found a hurt pregnant mare who needs him, asking her to wait just a little more. in that time, he kept his little Mirco alive waiting for him to heal. he also kept giving updates to Bubblegum who got in her head of being friends with the new mare and raises “babbehs” together. it hurt him a bit to break her heart but put it in her head that if she’s good she gets “babbehs” of her own. this was a test, if she fails she will get babbehs but she will be pillowed and muted for it. it was a good start when Bubblegum didn’t shit herself when she first saw the alicorn, but still, the same reaction he excepted. he has been keeping an eye on her and so far. she seems conflicted but hasn’t hurt the shit rat yet. this seems to be a good sign
(the milk is meant to be a replacement for normal fluffy babies, when a baby reaches a certain age, it starts to taste gross to them, making them not want it. it can work for food replacement for adults but they hate it)
oh i’m so hyped to see this and see more! I love Bubblegum’s face in the third panel especially, that’s a relatable expression right there.
I really do feel bad for her having to look after this little shit and hating it the whole way. On one hand, seeing her succeed would be great! But seeing him survive that long…
Just a sucker for locked-in syndrome inflicted for torment. <3
Im praying she succeeds cuz iirc in ch1 its stated this is a test of Alicorn Training her aka making sure she loves all foals. The micro tho, i hope karma ends him after the test or he becomes an enf tool for other micros afterwards.
i love the concept of micros being given to regular fluffys and told they are babies. the micros get agitated from being treated like babies (especially if they are stopped from communicating) and the mother gets increasingly distress at their strange behaviour and sad that they arent growing up.
[small criticism, the writing is still hard to read, even more so than part 1. for best readability, you want high contrast between text and background colours, so black on white or white on black are best. that doesnt mean you cant have coloured backgrounds, just putting the text in a box or speech bubble thats white, or using text with black or white outlines will help make it readable. its a cool idea for a series, id hate for it to lose views because its hard to read]
