Canned 5.5 (EchoBro)

Mimi freezes mid yapping and starting trembling.

“Da.. daddeh..? Nu huwt Mimi, wight? Mimi am good fwuffy!..”

You slap your hand with the metal stick. Yeah, it should be enough to teach her a lesson.

“Good fluffies know when a no means no, dear. You aren’t a good fluffy.”

You kneel down and pick up her favorite blanket, now reduced to a lot of ripped cloths, making a small line with it.

“Come here. Now. Or else you’ll be worse than you already are.”

“B-bu’.. daddeh..”

Now, Mimi.

“NU! NU WAN! YU DUMMEH DADDEH! MIMI AM BESTEST FWUFFY AN’ WAN BABBEHS! WAN BABBEHS NA—”

THWAP!

“EEEEEEE! HUHUUUU… WHY HUWT MIMI?”

You lift her slightly off the floor after putting the improvised “rope” in one of her hooves.

“Bad fluffy! BAD!”

THWAP!

“SCREEEEEEEEE!!”

THWAP!

With each blow, it feels like her skin sinks and gets redder, you can even hear some crack noises after hitting her chest.

“We handfed you for weeks, you little shit! And this is how you repay our love?! By shitting all over the place and scaring my kid?!”

THWAP!

You accidentally let go off her and Mimi instantly runs to Mr. Bunny, grabbing him tight to her bruised chest and curling up like a ball on the floor while she pisses herself.

“MISTAH BUNBUN! PWEASE PWOTECT MIMI FWOM MUNSTAH DADDEH! PWEASE! HUUUUU!”

You freeze for a instant… This wasn’t how things were supposed to go… But she deserves it, you convince yourself as you keep hitting her.

THWAP! THWAP! THWAP!

Mimi doesn’t even cry now, she only sobs. She sobs herself to sleep right there in front of you even though you’re still hitting her. First time she went unconscious.

“Hey, wake up. I’m not done yet.”

You pick her up by the scruff as she wakes up sobbing again.

The night’s gonna be long for both of you

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Read the previous parts here:

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Canned 2
Canned 2.5
Canned 3
Canned 4
Canned 4.5
Canned 5

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Thats enough for today. Hopefully she learns no means no.
You could always remind her of what happens when she doesnt accept no.

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Kind of a big jump to go from loving her to “Im going to beat her with a metal pole”

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She deserved it

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I think i pillowing is in order

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It said it gave “heawt huwties” to “little daddeh”. If a biotoy ever verbally abused my child I would do much worse.

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Next time use the sorry sketty

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If your kid got outsmarted by a fluffy you got a shitty kid

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Nah she just made the kid feel sad by shitting all over the room and sum stuff

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The famous ROPE?

Jeez don’t kill her!

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Or just a young and naive child, trying to do his best with a misbehaving pet.

Regardless of the child, it still doesn’t excuse the fluffy of its shitty behaviour.

Also a metal stick isn’t the same as a metal pole - something light and whippy like a car aerial makes for a perfect switch. My mother favoured using the handle end of a bamboo feather duster applied to the outstretched palm - maximum pain (all those nerve endings) for minimal damage (the palm doesn’t swell up as much as softer tissue like the buttocks or the back of the thighs).


@EchoBro: If she ‘falls asleep’ during a beating, she’s not actually sleeping, you’ve smacked her into unconsciousness. Take away Mr Bunbun, stick her in a sorry box and talk to her again in the morning, to see if she’s learnt her lesson.

A suggestion for next time, don’t strike the head - rump, flanks and bottom of the hooves would be best targets.

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I forgot the word when I was writing it, just added a note next to that part.

Y’know, I make the art then I make the text.

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I think you should seal the deal by showing her vids of mares dying in childbirth, but the possibility of her entering the wan die loop is pretty high

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I’d be more worried about her getting derped from a TBI at the moment.

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Show her videos of Bitch Mares hurting foals and say: “So this is want you want to become, huh?” If she still continues to be an absolute bitch to everyone; sell her to a breeder. An alicorn with those colours will be quite valuable & you can get a spayed/neutered fluffy instead.

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May I recommend the dark but very insightful video made by F.O.A.L about a fluffy mama having too many babies and some of those babies aren’t lucky enough to get nice home or how a mama treats her kids like toys rather than a responsibility

Use fear and understanding in order to scare her straight

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finally, a good lesson to that brat bitch mare

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You must really take Mr.Bun from her. Maybe pretend her plushie is talking to her owner and telling him that he doesn´t want to be with a Bad Fluffy like her.