"The Herd"Part 1,by:Able

The cold times were coming,the Elder knew it,so the herd was gathering food for all the members of the herd,it had been a good herd,but the Elder knew his time to go to sketty-land was coming too,so he remembered the old times…

He had been the founder of the herd,he found a mare and asked if she wanted to have babbehs,she said yes and he asked if she had food,the mare responded showing him her home,that had food,he knew when the cold-times would start,because it had ended some days ago,so both had special huggies and,4 months later,2 babbehs were born,but only one survived the cold times and that babbeh,was called John,in honor to his old owner,more fluffies joined the herd,each with their own roles:earthies guarded the herd,pegasus and some alicorns got food,the rest of the alicorns helped the earthies or babysitted the herd’s babbehs,and unicorns helped to defend,or were scouts,and John had grown up to take the leadership of the herd,now the Elder teached the babbehs about the story of the herd,and teached them the words and the animals languages.

It was good to remember it,and now,it was time for the class to start.
-Wet’s see,wa babbehs awe thewe?
-Wose!-said a pink earthie filly.
-Camo!-said a green colt who was too an earthie.
-Owange!-said a orange pegasus filly
-Wavendew!-screamed a purple alicorn colt.
-Otay,when fwuffie see a bawkie munstah sweep,wat you do?
-Giv fowebah sweepies!-said Rose.
-Giv huggies!-Camo said.
-Nu!If fwuffie do that den the bawkie munstah is gonna wake upsies and eat fwuffies,fwuffie have to gu away fwom munstah!-clarified Lavender.
-Yes,fwuffie gu away.-talked Orange.
-Owange and Wavendew awe wight,you have to gu away.-said the Elder.
-Weww the cwass has ended,go back to youw mummahs an wetuwn when bwight baww iz awmost gone
-Wavender iz smawt.-said to himself the Elder.

During the day,the pegasus and alicorns managed to get enourmous quantities of food,there was only 5 bright times until cold times arrived,and the end of the bright time arrived,and the four babbehs returned…

-Ewdew,Ewdew!-screamed Rose.
-Wa happen?
-Wavendew is bad fwuffy!
-Wai?
-Wavendew awmost giv fowebah sweepies to Owange!
-WA!-screamed the Elder in disbelief-Show Ewdew whewe iz Wavendew!
-Otay,Ewdew!

Rose guided the Elder through the passages and they discovered Lavender giving stompies to Orange.The Elder quickly said to Rose that she had to call Nurse,the first alicorn of the herd,and detained Lavender,that said the worst words a herd could hear from a babbeh…

-Wet smawtie go,dummeh fwuffie,wet smawtie giv fowebah sweepies to dummeh babbehs,giv fowebah sweepies to dummeh smawtie John and kiww aww munstah babbehs!

For the Elder,time stopped,how,how could have been Lavender a smarty?Then he noticed something,Lavender’s wings were gone,there wasn’t even a wound,and he realized,Lavender wasn’t from his herd.To be continued…

Next:“The Herd”part 2,by Able

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well,what do you guys think?

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I like it so far

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i actually based it of an idea that someone was doing with a herd that was sort of a vote,and one was a herd that lives in the woods,plus smart fluffies and this happened

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i absolutely love it

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The concept has potential, but your grammar, yeesh.

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Hmm maybe the elder is starting to have memory problems in his old age, or there is an impostor Lavender that isn’t exactly the same as fluffies are normally too dumb to realize the differences.

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I will reveal what is happening in the next part

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The heck? A switch? An inpostor???

Nice story so far, elder have food stock up for winter.

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